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This is the second session of eight in our online creative writing course, in which we’ll be exploring how to write a short story. Now that your creative juices have been stirred, you should be ready to start writing; if not, go back and try some of the exercises in the first session of this course, releasing your creativity.
Writing short stories versus writing novels
Most new prose writers have the beginnings of at least one novel in their drawer. They will get to chapter three or four and give up because they don’t have the skill, confidence or stamina to carry on. If you’d never run a marathon you would be a fool to enter the Great North Run without first attempting some shorter distances. Short stories are the best place for new writers to hone their craft. But don’t be fooled, they’re not necessarily the easiest option. It takes a great deal of skill to write a short story that’s effective – you will have to curtail any tendency to ramble on. And not all writers need to be novelists either. I believe F. Scott Fitzgerald was quite comfortable as a short story writer and only produced the occasional novel out of pressure from his publisher, while the great Raymond Carver never wrote a novel in his life.
Short stories are an endangered species
There was once a time when every magazine carried some short fiction. Sadly, that time has passed. Now, apart from some weekly women’s magazines in the UK, short stories have retreated between the dusty covers of literary publications. The situation has become so bad that a group of leading writers and publishers got together to start the Save the Short Story Campaign and are beginning to make good progress.
Short stories appear to be doing far better across the pond in America where the art form is more respected and accessible to ‘ordinary’ readers. However, there are signs that this may not continue. Read Stephen King’s thoughts on the decline of the American short story. You can check out Writer’s Market for a list of North American short story outlets.
How long is a short story?
So what is a short story? Short stories can be anything from 500 to 6000 words. Anything under 500 words tends to be labelled ‘flash fiction’ or ‘micro fiction’ (although some would argue it’s still a short story) and anything over 6000 is moving into novelette or novella territory. I would argue that a short story is something that can be read comfortably in one sitting and doesn’t leave you starving or bloated. Popular magazines tend to accept work of between 1000 – 2000 words, more literary ones go for longer. Children’s short stories tend to be under a thousand words. If you would like to write for younger readers, check out some of my articles on writing for children.
A short story is a slice of life
A short story is a slice of life. As such, you should narrow the time frame and geographical location of the piece. One plot, two or three characters and no more than two locations (one would be better) should fit into a short story. If this is too tight a fit perhaps you should be writing a novella or a novel.
Fig 1: Short story time span
How to begin a short story
Start your piece as close to the turning point or climax of the story as possible. Most writers take a paragraph or so to find their feet. On a second reading they will delete the first paragraph as unnecessary exposition or padding. Your first sentence is crucial; it should be filled with energy, intrigue and forward momentum. The reader should be stopped in their tracks and not be able to turn away until they’ve read the whole thing. The first sentence should raise questions that need to be answered. Take for example these openers:
- ‘My mother was making me a dress.’ (From ‘Red Dress – 1946′, Dance of the Happy Shades)
- ‘General Sash was a hundred and four years old. ‘ (From ‘A Late Encounter With the Enemy’, The Complete Stories)
- ‘Fact is the car needs to be sold in a hurry, and Leo sends Toni out to do it.’ (From ‘Are These Actual Miles’, The Oxford Book of American Short Stories)
Exercise 4: Jot down questions that arise from these openings and what, if anything, makes you want to read on. If you can get hold of copies of the stories do so. Ask yourself: were the questions answered? Was I satisfied with the answers? Was the answer what I expected?
Exercise 5: Use a trigger image, phrase or thought (see Releasing Your Creativity) then write down a leading, opening sentence. What questions might be raised? How might you answer those questions in a short story? What setting would be most appropriate to answer the questions? How long will it take for the question to be answered? Can you think of any characters that might help you tell the story and answer the question? (We will be looking at building a character in a future session and try writing another story from their perspective). Look over your answers and see whether or not the outline of a short story is emerging. If not, try another sentence or another trigger image.
Beginning, middle, end
Every short story should have an opening that is developed in the middle to build tension which reaches its climax towards the end, after which there is a rapid conclusion. For those of you who have studied any dramatic or literary theory you will recognise this progression as typical Aristotlean Three Act Structure. In a short story you should not spend too much time in the ‘first act’ where development, setting and exposition take place, and should start your narrative as close to the inciting incident (aka point of change, first turning point or initial crisis) as possible. The inciting incident is the event which upsets the apple cart of the characters’ ordinary world and compels them to act in a certain way in order to bring balance or closure to their disrupted environment. In the Red Dress it is the school dance which the narrator fears will bring humiliation. She then tries to fake illness in order to get out of it, then, when this fails, tries to remain as invisible as possible at the dance. We will look at how a character acts to bring or avoid change change in a future discussion.
Exercise 6: What is the ‘ordinary world’ of your opening sentence? Remember, this may be an abnormal world to most readers, but it should reflect the status quo of your characters before it is challeged or shaken up. What challenges this status quo? This is your inciting incident. Using only three paragraphs (50 – 60 words each) or less, start writing your short story. In this short space you should establish your ordinary world, your main character and the inciting incident of your story.
Obstacles, setbacks, climax and resolution
This is the outline of the rest of your story. Imagine a graph of building tension.
Fig 2: Dramatic development in three act structure
Your story should follow that arc by allowing your character to face obstacles, setbacks and minor victories on the way towards reaching the dramatic climax and bringing resolution.
Exercise 7: If you are graphically minded draw yourself a rough graph or jot down the beginning, middle and end of your story. Now write the story and fill in the gaps. If you’re not so graphically minded, just jot down a few key phrases or events that might carry your story forward to a possible conclusion. Don’t worry, this isn’t cast in stone, and you can change the beginning, middle, end and anything in between at any time. Many writers just write to find their voice. That’s fine. Once you have a first draft, go back and see if it has some kind of structure or arc. If not, you may have to tweak it a little.
I hope this has given you some insight on how to write a short story. Happy writing!
The next creative writing course session is writing from a point of view.
Welcome to The Crafty Writer's free online creative writing course, presented by Fiona Veitch Smith, a freelance journalist, editor, author, playwright, screenwriter and writing teacher. I hope that you'll see a dramatic improvement in the quality of your writing as you work through this course. 
It’s quite confusing exercise 4. Anyone to help me?
What do you find confusing, Ivan? Not sure how to answer without more information. You need to read the opening paragraphs of the stories and then write down any questions that come to mind and make you want to read more of the story. eg Who is General Sharp? How did he manage to live to 104 years old?
I’m thinking I should have started with writing short stories first then progressed on to writing my novel.
I think that was good advise and I think I’m getting some understanding on how to build a story and make it stick on the minds of others as they read and get into my story.
Thanks so much for these tips… It’s a good enough insight.
I appreciate the layout of this course. It will be fun to work through. Clearly, it will take some work. I just wrote my first sentences for a short story:
**Brenda was finished raising kids, and her husband’s business had taken off so that he no longer needed her help. She felt lost and needed some new goals, a fresh purpose. She decided to become a writer. She sat down at the computer. Nothing happened.**
To be continued :0)
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thanks
You’re most welcome.
So far, so good…thanks a lot!
So far , so good
This giedline is so good for a new short story writer.
thank you.
You’re welcome.
I have so enjoyed this lesson. It has shown me another way to write a short story. Which is what I want to do, write children short stories. Thanks!
Question:
Pertaining to children’s stories, are Once upon a time stories still wanted and read? I love writing these and I was wondering. I live in America.
Only if written ironically, I’m afraid. So no, not really fashionable anymore.
I believe that if you write the stories you are inspired to write, and write them well, it will always be worth doing. Follow your inspiration.
What is a trigger imagem?
Thanks for the course.
Hi Jessica, if you go back to the first session on Releasing your Creativity, trigger images are discussed there. They are simply picture that help to stimulate (trigger) your ideas. It can be anything that makes you think: hmmm, there’s a story / poem in that. Good luck with your writing.
This is very helpful. Thank you so much for the wonderful insight.
Just finished session on how to write short stories. Let me just say it was actually good to write the being of a story….when all is said and done I am quite proud of whT I have accomplished.
Well done
Rightly proud.
thank you for being so generous with your knowledge, i love your explanations, I will try the exercises soon!!
Beyond grateful for your offering… Looking forward to this course. Will be sharing and supporting your work. Best wishes Fiona <3
Hi Ana, you’re most welcome. Happy writing!
Wow, I am writing the story in head as I read, this is awesome. I am an excellent PhD level thesis writer and boardroom director level corporate business report writer but this is entirely different and awesome. Short, simple, easy to follow and powerful tips. You just transformed me from craftsman to an artist. I would never write the same way again. You changed me profoundly. Wow, I love you. Salute.
You’re most welcome. Thanks for the thanks! I am delighted to hear you have been freed to write creatively.
This was very helpful. It was surprising to find a free class on writing, anywhere. But to find one that is so inclusive and thorough as this (to even include a graph example, for instance) is very good.
Thanks. I find it difficult to follow a format with any kind of writing, rather than letting my creativity just flow and editing later, but I can see the rationale with short story writing, where planning helps to abbreviate the story.
You’re most welcome. And I appreciate that you appreciate it. You’d be surprised at how many people contact me to complain that they aren’t getting free feedback as part of the course! Hope you enjoy the rest of the course.
HI Fiona, still loving the course! I’m just wondering, can a short story be effective if it ends on a cliff hanger? My story has a gradually rising tension throughout, hits a climax and ends before the reader can see what happens next. I want to answer some of the readers’ questions but leave them with even more. Is that a good idea or might the reader find it annoying and unsatisfying? Is it overdone or atypical of short stories? The genre is horror, if that helps!
Hi Sandra, the unresolved ending is quite acceptable in the horror genre. Horror is predicated on the sense that no matter how much we try to stop it, evil will always find a way. So the non-resolved ending enforces that. So yes, a cliffhanger is fine! Have fun.
I loved this! I actually used this exercise to further develop one of my main characters in my novel. I took one instance, a dramatic one, and wrote a short story with it. I love how it turned out and may end up using it in my book. I was able to really nail this guy and his relationship with his father down by using the tips you provided! Thank you so much!!!!
You’re welcome! Good luck with the rest of the novel, Beth.
This course has been very helpful so far. Thank you so much, Fiona!
You’re welcome! Happy writing.
I enjoyed writing the story. I however went a little over the 60 mark on my last paragraph… I’m done of those who can go on and on